Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

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modern time , everybody wants a luxury lifestyle and eager for earning more and more.
Therefore
, some elder
people
looking for
jobs
which are related to technology and they have to compete with youngsters because adults are more aware
how
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to use technology and they have more opportunities for
jobs
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field
.
Firstly
, the biggest problem due to
this
methodology is
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difficult to get a
job
for
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young age
people
and reducing
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chances for new
people
in
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market.
secondly
,
this
type of mentality helps to grow unemployment percentage because some
people
do not get
job
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in their
field
and they
also
do not want to
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doing
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job
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a job
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in
the
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another
field
or
lower level
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field
.
Finally
, In some counties,
this
concept
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a budget issue for governments.
For example
in India, an old age group
people
got
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retirement from
first
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job
and they
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a pension for
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life time
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lifetime
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and after they starting a
job
in another
field
. Due to
this
plan ,
Indian
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government faces a financial issue and unemployment. On the other side, every problem comes with some solution ,so we have some ideas to overcome
this
problem.
Firstly
,
a
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job
market
have
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to make some rules for
new comers
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newcomers
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and for elder
people
so they do not interfere with each other in
a
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job
market.
A companies
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Companies
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have to decide
a
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age group for
particular
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job
so senior
people
can not
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on
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their
jobs
.
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,
an
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organizations have to decide how they can promote their employees so senior
people
will not think about
for
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quitting a
job
and they will not compete with
young
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the young
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generation for new
jobs
. In a conclusion, it is
nessessary
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necessary
for everybody for getting
a
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update and upgrade themselves but
job
organizations have to take a decision for saving a young generation
jobs
to reduce
a
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unemployment.
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