Some people believe that individuals are becoming more and more dependent on each other, where as others believe that people are becoming more independent from each other. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In recent times, with the fast-growing

world

Add a comma

world,

show examples

the dependency on each other in every individual has been elevated progressively,believed by some. Whilst,many others came forward with a belief that

people

Use synonyms

are more likely to become independent of each other nowadays.

This

Linking Words

essay will discuss both the field of vision,followed by my opinion.

Firstly

Linking Words

,to highlight the

positive's

Change noun form

positives

show examples

of individualism,it plays a significant role in increasing the

will power

Correct your spelling

willpower

show examples

and self-confidence of a sole who intends to achieve

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

milestone.

Also

Linking Words

, today's generation seeks help from technological evolution by becoming independent from

other human being

Change the wording

another human being

other human beings

show examples

,which inculcates more capabilities in them to deal with life challenges.

For example

Linking Words

,involvement of

ones'

Change noun form

one's

show examples

own thought process to

buildup

Correct your spelling

build

show examples

personal

Correct article usage

a personal

show examples

business may usually neglect the reluctance caused by someone's interference.

Moreover

Linking Words

,personal indulgence is witnessed usually through acquiring independent accomplishments.

Thus

Linking Words

,

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

personally believe that

as

Change preposition

apply

show examples

being

Use synonyms

dependant

Replace the word

dependent

show examples

on anyone can make

ones'

Change noun form

one's

show examples

mind intellectually

disable

Change the form of the verb

disabled

show examples

.

Neverthless

Correct your spelling

Nevertheless

,though working unassisted proves to be a crucial factor in many facets of life,the requirement of

geriartrics

Correct your spelling

geriatrics

paediatrics

and infants

of being

Change preposition

to be

show examples

Use synonyms

dependant

Replace the word

dependent

show examples

on others must be considered

as

Change preposition

apply

show examples

essential.Say

Linking Words

for

Add the comma(s)

, for

show examples

instance,old

people

Use synonyms

suffering from paralysis or

epilapsy

Correct your spelling

epilepsy

and several other

disease

Change to a plural noun

diseases

show examples

cannot sustain their lives

independantly

Correct your spelling

independently

.

Furthermore

Linking Words

,

certain

Add an article

a certain

show examples

group of

illeducated

Correct your spelling

ill-educated

educated

ill educated

people

Use synonyms

asserts to rely on someone even in the age of modern helping parameters.As

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

there is a fear in mind to

face

Wrong verb form

facing

show examples

technological glitches

while

Linking Words

using online assistance and

hence

Linking Words

people

Use synonyms

tends

Change the verb form

tend

show examples

to become more

Use synonyms

dependant

Replace the word

dependent

show examples

on others in

this

Linking Words

scenerio

Correct your spelling

scenario

. In conclusion,the phenomenon of being

Use synonyms

dependant

Replace the word

dependent

show examples

or

independant

Correct your spelling

independent

cannot be measured in general as it varies from situation to situation based on

peronsal

Correct your spelling

personal

perspectives.The individual may become

Correct your spelling

reliable

relaible

Correct your spelling

reliable

on

Change preposition

to

show examples

other

Fix the agreement mistake

others

show examples

in any aspect and the other person may not need

anyones'

Change noun form

anyone's

show examples

help for the same matter,but being

Correct your spelling

independent

independant

Correct your spelling

independent

presents a prominent result