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Write a paragraph about a traditional meal or drink that is popular in your country. What makes the meal or drink special? Is it also popular in other countries?

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 is one of the
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 traditional food. The most delicious and typical brand of
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 in Vietnam is Ha Noi
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 with a wonderful flavour.
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 is made from rice noodles, beef or chicken and other spices.
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 is a noodle soup;
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, it’s better when being added with beansprout. Eating
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 with family not only reflects
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 tradition but
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 atmosphere. At weekends, my friends and I usually go to a cafeteria to enjoy
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 because
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 is served at many restaurants in Vietnam. There are two main kinds of
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: noodle soup with beef and sliced chicken, both of them are delicious and high i Check the Essay New Essay
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 is
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 food of almost
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 and often served as breakfast.
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,
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 is popular in the international market for its pleasant taste and reasonable price. Foreign tourists visit Vietnam and they really like the taste of
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 here. I am very proud of it. In near future, I hope
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 will be more famous in other countries so that foreigners can enjoy
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 cuisine and understand
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 culture.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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