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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays, there is
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widespread concern about the future of printed
books
 including newspapers as some people be opined that they will not be patronised because every book will be free online. I strongly agree with
this
 viewpoint.
This
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books
 through
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 and free online
informations
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 will make printed
books
 and newspapers to be abandoned in the future. To start with, perhaps the foremost reasons why some people believed that
publicated
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publication
books
 will not be used again is due to
global
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 digitalization of
books
 and mass media.
This
 implies that
books
 are now available on the internet.
For example
, a recent study conducted
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 a university undergraduate in Nigeria revealed that almost every book has been digitalized and converted to E-book, PD files and stored in their respective websites.
Furthermore
, there is
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easy access to E-book through
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 and free internet.
This
 shows that people can check
for
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 what to read and study using their smartphones and computers.
For instance
, there is a BBC app where all news, articles and interviews of British broadcasting cooperation can be
view
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, read and study at will without stress.
Hence
, there is no need to purchase printed copies of
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 when they can
be obtain
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by
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 just a click on Apps and their website respectively. Admittedly, opponents of
this
 viewpoint allude that there are lots of fake news and
books
 not edited on the internet and that only printed ones can be trusted .
However
, research has shown that
books
 and information
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 been digitalized and their authors always have the copyright and website to access them. Conclusively,
this
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books
, free online information and digitization in Mass media will make printed
books
 and newspapers obsolete in no distance future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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