Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspaper or watching TV. Do you think it is a positive development?

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,
people
have different interests whether to read the daily
news
online or on
TV
. While it is believed that
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provides
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an efficient
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way for
people
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receive
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news
immediately, watching
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TV
seems to be a
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positive
development
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society. It is true that many
people
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tend
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to watch
the
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recent
news
through their mobile phone or
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laptop
. By subscribing the certain
news
website that many readers can get the breaking
news
anytimes
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anytime
and anywhere. There are various of
resourses
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resources
that
people
can search the
news
background deeply on the internet which watching
news
on the
televsion
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television
can not provide.
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,
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TV
news
can not reply and have to wait for
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certain time to watch it which is not convenient
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audiants
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audiences
audience
.
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, online
news
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the majority preference for
the
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modern
people
's
first
choice. In spite of the positive reasons
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online
news
above, I believe that watching
TV
is the best way to get the
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correct
current
information. It is important that the
TV
news
are normally well organized and investigated by the whole group of journalists.
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, it
also
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been regulated and
supervied
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supervised
by the government authorities if they are reported the fake or exaggerate
news
. Many
people
tend to watch it on the
TV
because they believe it will be the most
trusthful
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truthful
trustful
resource which is pretty close to the
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original
one. If there is no
TV
news
to watch and
people
had only
have
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the online
news
to read that reader might be misleading by the fake
news
reporters which can cause a negative consequence to
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society. In conclusion, it is clear that online
news
is the most efficient way that modern
peope
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people
can
recived
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received
receive
the
rencent
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recent
news
immediately, I do think that
TV
news
are
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the most
realiable
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reliable
resources to get the correct report and it
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positive
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impacted
to
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society.
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