Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to this? Do you think that advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Numerous frozen and pre-cooked
have different chemicals to preserve them. Having canned and fast
has its benefits especially in our modern fast-paced world where everyone is in a hurry and does not have enough time to cook, but overall, I am convinced that the disadvantages of
sort of trend definitely do outweigh the advantage There are various advantages to having processed and easy cooked
, we are living in a modern world where we are so much busy with our daily routine work and not paying attention to our
, we rely on ready-made
as McDonald, KFC, or other fast
, without concentrated efforts on making
at home, we can easily reduce our time by using processed
In addition
to that, pre-cooked
have an abundance of minerals and vitamin that are essential to our body.
On the other hand
, fast and processed
is very disadvantageous.
To begin
with, I strongly believe that one of the most disastrous disadvantages of using processed
is the lack of hygiene.
is because those people who are making these
are not well trained and do not have any
hander diploma or certificate.
are rich in vitamin, these are not for everyone, because some people have been advised of dietary restrictions by physicians. To sum up, I hold to the opinion that the disadvantages do certainly outweigh the advantages of having processed or ready-made
for which not all people are being addressed while preparing them, as well as having serious concerns about their processing.

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