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Studies show that that criminals have a low level of the education for this reason , some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educated people in prison so they can get a good job. To extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Studies show that due to
lack
 of
education
 people will tend to break the law and make illegal activities, certain demographics of society believe that the better way to bring down offences is to educate
offenders
 in jail so that they can get a dignified job.
This
 essay will agree with the statement. In my opinion,
offenders
 tend to do offences due to a
lack
 of proper skill set and morals which will be gained with proper
education
.
Firstly
, the main reason for crimes is the
lack
 of financial opportunities. When a person is taught a good
education
 in prison,
then
 he/she will have an opportunity to restart
the
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life
 with the new learning gained during his imprisonment.
For example
, an uneducated, who is doing crimes out of hunger will be able to do an attender job in any office and gain some money to live a better
life
.
Secondly
,
education
 brings the awareness of
life
 morals and help a criminal to understand the difference between good and bad, things to do and not to do, and most importantly the dignity of
life
.
For example
, when an educated person attempt to do a crime, his morals learned from his
education
 will stop him to do
such
 acts and drives him on the right path. In conclusion, the main reason for crimes are due to
lack
 of
education
 in
offenders
, it helps to reduce the crime rate when
offenders
 are provided with
education
 during their imprisonment as it helps them to get a job. I agree with
this
 opinion,
education
 will help criminals to change their mindset and move them towards work by providing the right opportunities to them.
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