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●A major point of contact for Customers’ technical and business teams to tackle any IT Operation issues and proactively resolve escalations. ● 4+ years of experience in
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facing roles in the telecommunication sector, including aligning with 3rd party vendors, controlling milestones and focusing on customer’s priorities. ● Experience in the leading and guidance of technical teams to cover the contract’s obligations of OSS and BSS projects: identification of main goals and KPIs, resources planning, tasks distribution and controlling, analysis of potential improvements.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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