Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?

In

this

contemporary epoch,

women

are presented with many opportunities in every field to add value

with

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their skills. One

such

area of work wherein

participation

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of

women

has caused a lot of

controversy

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is the

police

force. The opponents believe that because of certain limitations which females have as compared to their male counterparts, they should be refrained from joining the

police

.

However

, I believe that

this

bias is unnecessary and

women

can prove as an asset to the team. To commence with, according to the opponents,

police

job needs a lot of physical strength to deal with unexpected situations especially at crime scenes. Indeed, the strength between a man and a woman cannot be measured on

a

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same scale because of the differences in the body composition that they have.

However

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there are many techniques like the Asian form called Jusitju which gives an upper hand to

a

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women

a woman

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women

in a fight.

Women

must be trained to deal with situations that can help them use their strength in the right place when required. Another important factor is that unlike men, who are

weilding

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power and authority,

women

are more inclined towards making a compromise which makes them the best member when dealing with offenders which

requires

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good questioning and negotiation skills.

Also

, having a

women

police

accompany the female criminal adds a layer of trust in the system and avoids any possibility of misbehaviour that can happen during the arrest. To recapitulate, I firmly believe that having

women

in

police

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the police

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force can add immense value and strengthen the team.

However

, it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that appropriate training is imparted to the female force.