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Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 contemporary epoch,
women
 are presented with abundant opportunities in every field to portray their skills. One
such
 area of work wherein
participation
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 of
women
 has caused a lot of controversies is the
police
force
. The opponents of
this
 view believe that because of certain limitations which females have as compared to their male counterparts, they should be refrained from joining the
police
.
However
, I contend that
this
 bias is unnecessary and
women
 can prove as an asset to the team. To commence with, the cardinal reason why people oppose
women
 in
police
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the police
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force
 is
because
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that
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this
 profession needs a lot of physical strength to deal with unexpected situations
especially
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,especially
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 at crime scenes. Indeed, the strength of men and
women
 cannot be measured on
a
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the
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 same scale because of the differences in the body composition that they have but
this
 can be countered with the right skills.
For example
, there are many techniques like the Asian form called Jusitju which gives an upper hand to
a
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women
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women
 in a fight.
Thus
,
women
 must be trained to deal with situations that can help them use their strength in the right place when required. Another important factor is that unlike men, who are wielding power and authority,
women
 are more inclined towards making a compromise which gives them an upper hand when dealing with offenders as it requires good questioning and negotiation skills.
Also
, having a
women
police
 accompany the female criminal adds a layer of trust in the system and avoids any possibility of misbehaviour that can happen during the arrest. To give an example, it is mandatory in my country for a female officer to accompany a woman offender when arresting during night hours. To recapitulate, I firmly believe that having
women
 in
police
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force
 can add immense value and strengthen the team.
However
, it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that appropriate training is imparted to the female
force
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent equality
  • law enforcement
  • empathy
  • gender-based violence
  • community relations
  • diversity
  • team performance
  • systemic gender bias
  • physical requirements
  • culture of masculinity
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