Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some would argue that automobiles should not be allowed in major
cities
.
This
essay completely agrees with
this
statement because they cause too much pollution that affects the
environment
of the city and many people die in the
ambulance
due to the traffic. Due to the increased number of
cars
,ownerships the major
cities
'
environment
became too polluted.
This
is to say that nearly all
cars
run on fossil fuel and release carbon dioxide gas, that trapped the sun heat, in the
environment
and
that is
what causes global warming in the world and if action is not taken to stop
this
situation, we will have to face the consequences of
this
in the future.
For example
, according to an article in The Times Newspaper that by 2040 some countries and large
cities
,
such
as Bangladesh and New York, could go under the sea if the appropriate measures are not taken to stop global warming. The
second
main reason that
cars
should be prohibited on the road of large
cities
is that they prevent emergency vehicles to reach their destinations on time. Too many
cars
create traffic congestion on the road that cause delay and stops the
ambulance
and fire brigade to get their destination on time.
For instance
, a news article in The Indian Newspaper revealed that nearly eight thousand people die every year in an
ambulance
in Delhi while going to the hospital . In conclusion, some believe that automobile should be made illegal in metropolitan
cities
,
this
essay agrees with
this
idea because
cars
cause too much pollution that impacts the city's
environment
and they stop
ambulance
or fire brigade to reach their destination on time.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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