Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that a person should have

a

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good behaviour in order to be successful in life and due to

this

fact , they believe that

parents

should teach their

children

how to behave well in

the

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society,meanwhile, others believe that

school

is a better place to learn

this

. In my opinion,

parents

should give knowledge based on basic manners but

school

should

also

be the place to learn as it gives a real-time experience. The following essay will discuss both views and will

also

give an explanation of my opinion.

To begin

with ,

parents

play a crucial role in determining the behaviour of their

children

as all the manners are originated from home.

For example

, if a child behaves badly at home, that same gesture will be replicated in the community and

this

will not have a positive effect on

the

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society.

Additionally

,

parents

have

a

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better control over their

children

because they know each and every habit and they can play a vital role in changing their attitude towards

the

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society.

On the other hand

,

school

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is

also

a necessary place because a child gets an opportunity to interact with different people.

For instance

, in front of teachers they show respect to them ,

moreover

,

children

also

depict a helpful nature to their friends who are in need.

Additionally

, in schools

children

get a chance to perform a group task and due to which, they get to learn about unity. To conclude, in my opinion ,

parents

should teach basic manners to their

children

and these will prove useful

them

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when they are in

school

,

however

, it is necessary for a child to be at

school

as they

whould

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get

an

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experience in dealing with different kinds of people.