Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that a person should have
a
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good behaviour in order to be successful in life and due to
this
fact , they believe that
parents
should teach their
children
how to behave well in
the
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society,meanwhile, others believe that
school
is a better place to learn
this
. In my opinion,
parents
should give knowledge based on basic manners but
school
should
also
be the place to learn as it gives a real-time experience. The following essay will discuss both views and will
also
give an explanation of my opinion.
To begin
with ,
parents
play a crucial role in determining the behaviour of their
children
as all the manners are originated from home.
For example
, if a child behaves badly at home, that same gesture will be replicated in the community and
this
will not have a positive effect on
the
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society.
Additionally
,
parents
have
a
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better control over their
children
because they know each and every habit and they can play a vital role in changing their attitude towards
the
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society.
On the other hand
,
school
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is
also
a necessary place because a child gets an opportunity to interact with different people.
For instance
, in front of teachers they show respect to them ,
moreover
,
children
also
depict a helpful nature to their friends who are in need.
Additionally
, in schools
children
get a chance to perform a group task and due to which, they get to learn about unity. To conclude, in my opinion ,
parents
should teach basic manners to their
children
and these will prove useful
them
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when they are in
school
,
however
, it is necessary for a child to be at
school
as they
whould
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get
an
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experience in dealing with different kinds of people.

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