Living in a country where you gave to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The line charts indicate information about the development in burglary,
car
theft
and
robbery
in terms of crime in Newport city between the year 2003 and 2012. From the ,graph it can be seen that all three categories showed some fluctuation during the years.
However
,
car
theft
and
robbery
remained steady, while the figure for burglary dropped suddenly. In 2003, approximately 600 incidents accounted for
robbery
.
This
showed a gradual rise to around 900 in the year 2005. Afterwards, the rate levelled off to 500 accidents
subsequently
. During the final ,years the figure showed some fluctuation and ,
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robbery
experienced a gradual rise to 600 in 2012. Regarding
car
theft
, it started with merely 2800 in the
first
year.
This
remained stable till 2005 and showed an upward trend in 2006, with around 2000 crashes. In four years ,times it slowly went up to just over 2500 in 2010 and
finally
reached a number of 2800 as at the beginning of the period. Burglary started at about 3400 in 2003, which was the highest number in all three areas in 2003.
Then
, it steadily came down to almost 1200 in 2008 and crossed
car
theft
numbers in 2006. After that, they jumped to nearly 1500 in 2009. From here, they remained steady and slightly fell to around 1400 in 2012.
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