Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier. while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of debate

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matter, majority of individuals assume that

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the arrival of new technologies

such

as online shopping

apps

and some gadgets which are used in malls have made purchasing items simple, and I fully agree with

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. On contrary, some persons disagree with that. In

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we will discuss both points. From what I can see, with the invention of online

apps

shopping is more convenient in comparison

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trend.

For instance

, you want to buy a watch, and you just have to tap some buttons on your

smart phone

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, in

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3-4

days

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your watch will be

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your wrist. Without going outside of your home, you have got your desired item. Recently,

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world was affected badly by the COVID-19 virus, to reduce the spread all governments had ordered to

shutdown

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the shopping complexes, and

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lockdown was for almost 1year in Canada. To deal with

this

problem people used various online

apps

such

as amazon, e-bay, shopping-cart etc., to buy all their essential items. I think if

this

technology was not available

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that time

then

people had to suffer more difficulties in the time of lockdown.

On the other hand

, some persons are completely against

this

trend because they think that internet shopping is affecting the local shop owners as well as the big shopping malls, and, no doubt,

this

is the fact that online shopping is the main cause for many business failures.

For example

, a survey was conducted by the BBC news channel which states that 40% local shops had faced shut down because of

this

and that survey

also

shows, in

last

year 58% more job opportunities has been created by internet shopping

apps

. To conclude, in my perspective, modern ways of shopping delivers more benefits than harms.

This

is the fact that

this

trend has destroyed some business dealers, but it

also

gives many other business opportunities, and its advantages

outweighs

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the disadvantages.