Some people think that government should spend money on providing faster transport, while others consider that there are other priorities for public transport (example- cost, environment). Discuss both the views and give you opinion?

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to spend
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think that it is not most important for public
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growth of the country the
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fastest
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should spend
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with the help of these individual save their time there is your destination at time individual can cover long distance very easily
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it's good for employees to reach in office in
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fast process masses spend more time with their families
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instance, Japan is very developing
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countries in term of Fast and efficient transportation for
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on the opposite side, I agree with the view that it is more important for
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to priorities expand on their areas particularly the environment spending on reducing pollution
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health issues with cleaners of water and air by providing
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I believe that
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should spend
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mode. To sum up,
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public
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field people feel comfortable I was still I believe that
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should think about
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