A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety.therefore some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits.to what extent do you agree?

Every individual has the rights to ensure their safety and having social
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from the
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. Others may say that the officials should give more importance and raise the budget in security than spending lesser on social
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for the citizens. I totally disagree with
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notion,
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it needs to give equal responsibility by the
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as it has given importance to our society.
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with, security personnel are the ones in charge of peace in our place. They are the person whom we can upon
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and ask for help if there is a crime happen.
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, if the
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will not give some budget for their gear or give them some
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like health insurance and education for their kids, they will become abusive and corrupt
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of doing their duty well.
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, the
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will ensure the things they needed especially in terms of their family.
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, social
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are
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essential to every citizen, like health insurance. The
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will respond to these matters. Hospitals would have the proper equipment and enough workers to cater to the need of sick people.
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, the poor country in Asia that just have few doctors and nurses and don't have even a proper machine to test the patients is considered as one of the failures of every official.
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why it needs to be addressed by the
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and put enough funding into it. To conclude, security and social
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like health care are both essential in society.
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, the
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is responsible for
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, it needs to put some equal spending of money.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • national security
  • sovereignty
  • foreign entities
  • military sector
  • economic growth
  • inequality
  • vulnerable populations
  • elderly
  • disabled
  • unemployed
  • social stability
  • public health
  • balanced approach
  • appropriate funding
  • nation’s needs
  • priorities
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