Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of debate with regard to whether technology has
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our social interactions with other individuals in a positive way or in a negative way. A plethora of persons
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that
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way, and I fully with agree with that the using of latest gadgets which we are using these days to socializing had brought numerous negative effects.
Firstly
, with the arrival
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media
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as Facebook, Instagram, Snapchat and so on, people like to chat or call via their smartphones and laptops due to the fact that these days individuals do not like to talk with one another face to face. To illustrate that,
last
year a survey was conducted by the Discovery channel which states that 75%
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want to engage in real talk
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they feel more comfortable to interact online, and
this
trend is more widespread in western nations in comparison to Asian countries.
Moreover
, Researchers mentioned that
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generation has lost their ability to interact naturally which is a not good sign of a healthy society. Another point to
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is that all adults
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to play games on their high-tech gaming consoles in their free time because of that numerous persons do not know have any knowledge about their neighbours.
For instance
, a newspaper says that in U.S.A 60 per cent crowd is unable to recognize the faces of their neighbours. Ten years ago, everyone was using their free time to interact with their
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by visiting parks but
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now time has changed. To conclude, according to the surveys and studies, technology has affected our social interactions considerably, of course, in
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manner. In my perspective, we should try to reduce the usage of social media as well as various smart tech gadgets and will try to interact naturally.
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