You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

#party #cook #dish #guests #recipe #friend

Dear Rose, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter seeking your help

for

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my birthday

party

week. On the occasion of my

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twenty-fifth

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twenty fifth

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birthday, I am giving a

party

at my house. I want to invite my

collegues

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colleagues

and our friends to the birthday

party

. I am so excited to see all of you after

long

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time.

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the

party

, I want to cook something special for the guests by myself. Immediately, the dish you cooked for me came into my mind. Do you remember? You cooked creamy cheese pasta for me when I met you

last

month. It was so delicious and I can't forget the taste of it. I want to cook the same recipe for the guests coming to the

party

. Please send me the ingredients list that I have to buy and send me a video

how

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to cook it. You are the

first

person I am inviting

for

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this

party

. Please come to my house

bit

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early in the morning, so we can spend some time before guests arrive. Thanks for

love

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your love

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. I am looking forward to

see

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you. Best regards Dheeraj

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdor activities like hiking and climbing in nstural environment. Whu is this case? How theycsn be encouraged to go out?

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