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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

#party #cook #dish #guests #recipe #friend
Dear Rose, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter seeking your help
for
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with
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 my birthday
party
next
 week. On the occasion of my
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twenty-fifth
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twenty fifth
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 birthday, I am giving a
party
 at my house. I want to invite my
collegues
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colleagues
 and our friends to the birthday
party
. I am so excited to see all of you after
long
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 time.
In
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 the
party
, I want to cook something special for the guests by myself. Immediately, the dish you cooked for me came into my mind. Do you remember? You cooked creamy cheese pasta for me when I met you
last
 month. It was so delicious and I can't forget the taste of it. I want to cook the same recipe for the guests coming to the
party
. Please send me the ingredients list that I have to buy and send me a video
how
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 to cook it. You are the
first
 person I am inviting
for
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to
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this
party
. Please come to my house
bit
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 early in the morning, so we can spend some time before guests arrive. Thanks for
love
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your love
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. I am looking forward to
see
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 you. Best regards Dheeraj
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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