You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter   explain how you found the shop describe the item that you would like to sell Say how much you would like to sell the item for

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter in regards to sell an antique watch which I got from my grandfather. I found your shop advertisement in
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and I am glad that you buy and sell valuable old items. I have
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1891 Rolex watch with me. I got that one from my grandfather. He owned it for a long time and gave it to me as a birthday gift. It is working
absoluetly
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absolutely
fine without any
scracthes
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scratches
on it.
Pandameic
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Pandemic
affected my
bussiness
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business
and I lost
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most all my investors in it. To avoid the
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mortgage
I want
sell
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the watch which I got from my grandfather. Considering its age, condition and market value, I am expecting at least 500,000 dollars for it. Please reply
me
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with the time that you are free to talk about
this
. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Dheeraj
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