Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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specious extinction and loss of

bio-diversity

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biodiversity

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my opinion, there is one main reason

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for it: and it is pollution, which people produce in every area of

animals

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natural habitat. The most expecting solution is to promote awareness of how destructive

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can be and reduce

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output. Humans generate pollution in all areas, where they produce something for their lives. They destruct forests by cutting them off for paper and building materials, let out dangerous liquid and gas substances on factories during products manufacturing. The

pollutants

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influence on qualities of food, water and air, which are necessary for

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to survive surviving and be health. Struggling from diseases,

animals

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can not reproduce a strong breed, which is necessary (=required) to save the population.

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of all, to reduce specious extinction, humans have to be aware of the danger, which

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might contain, and how they influence

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and surrounding areas. The

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step, but not the less meaningful one, includes reducing

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of dangerous substances produced by manufactories. Factories could use filters for their exhaust and drain pipes. Deforestation companies could recycle used paper and wood made things for new products or use technologies to remake natural materials like fall leaves. Your problems and solutions should correspond, e.g. describe two problems in paragraph 1 and provide solutions for them in Paragraph 2 To summarize, people’s non-acquaintance(unawareness/callowness) and inaction about pollution impact might cause environmental troubles like specious extinction and loss of

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biodiversity

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, we can reduce

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influence of

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by protecting our ecosystem from dangerous substances, released into water and air, and deforestation, using our technical abilities.