History tells that people have often thought about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
Every human being
desire
to build and be a part of an ideal Wrong verb form
desires
society
. Use synonyms
Although
many times in the past people have Linking Words
fascinated
by constructing Add a missing verb
been fascinated
such
a community, often they have not succeeded in creating Linking Words
one
. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss what makes a well-ordered community and how can we create Linking Words
one
.
An ideal community should be Use synonyms
the
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apply
one
where the human being can dwell with complete peace and harmony. Use synonyms
This
civilisation is free from any discrimination against caste, race, colour or religion of people living there. Linking Words
For instance
, civilians residing in Linking Words
such
a Linking Words
society
will develop a sense of fairness and justice. To give an example from Indian history, during the rule of Emperor Akbar, his Use synonyms
subject
dwelled in total harmony and fairness as the Emperor would not tolerate any inequality against Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
anything
. For these reasons, I believe an ideal Correct pronoun usage
them
society
is Use synonyms
the
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apply
one
that provides equal opportunities to every person irrespective of what Use synonyms
democratic
they belong to.
There are certain ways in which building Replace the word
democracy
such
a Linking Words
society
can be possible. Use synonyms
Firstly
, every human being should learn the values of equality and must treat every other living being with respect and kindness. Linking Words
Secondly
, they must elect political leaders who share the same view for their countries as Linking Words
this
will help the government to intervene and keep a check if any imbalance is observed in Linking Words
society
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For example
, the US has elected Joe Biden as their president who believes in equality which gives a sense of pride among citizens and encourages them to inculcate and spread these values.
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To sum up
, creating a perfect Linking Words
society
can be a very challenging mission as it is difficult to instil complete peace and harmony. Use synonyms
However
, it is not entirely impossible. By drilling these values into all humans and with the help of government, we can ultimately contribute to making an ideal Linking Words
society
for the betterment of people.Use synonyms
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