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The culture of different places are now looking similar in modern times. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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In
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 contemporary era, cultural differences are disappearing in most part of the world. The reasons for
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 is frequent travel and massive scale media outreach. In my opinion,
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 development would adversely affect the local cultures, and it would demolish local traits and traditions.
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 has affected many indigenous cultures.
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 is because as
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 regularly travel internationally, they now bring foreign
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 back home.
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, many non-resident Pakistani when visit Pakistan tend to follow the western
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 and celebrate festival
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 as Halloween and Christmas rather than Eid.
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, the local traditions and festivals
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 as Bassant are no longer celebrated.
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, electronic and social media has influenced many individuals and communities to follow a unified
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 and fashion.
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, these factors encouraged
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 to follow global
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 and festivals rather than their own. In my view, similar customs and traditions have certain demerits that can not be overlooked.
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, when
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 tend to follow and admire global customs, the local values and norms will lose their significance. To illustrate, if
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 start following foreign
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, it will be hard to preserve local literature, heritage, past accomplishments and language.
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, a lack of interest of
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 would cause many communities to lose their identity and uniqueness. In conclusion, a similar
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 is followed because
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 bring back foreign
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 when they travel abroad and sometimes media
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 persuade them to stick to the global
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.
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, I believe it is an issue of great concern for indigenous communities as they will lose their identity and obligate their historic achievements.
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