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Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.

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In many nations around the globe,
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 has been a grave issue.
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The
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 country
such
 as, India from where I belong,
traffic
 congestion has been the serious problem that has to be tackled at the most priority. In
this
 essay, some measures are suggested that can help to resolve the issue to
certain
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 degree.
Firstly
, public
transport
 should be accessible at cheaper rates to the citizens so that people opt for it more rather than their own personal
vehicles
. Many people choose to commute in their own private cars due to lack of public
transport
 system on frequent intervals which can cause them to delay in reaching their desired locations. According to
me
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, the buses or metro should be available at more frequent timings and at close stops.
Moreover
,
the
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fuel prices should be increased and heavy taxes imposed on
vehicles
. In
this
way
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 people will go
for
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 public
transport
 and in turn causing less
traffic
 on roads.
Secondly
, mostly the
traffic
 is caused by
vehicles
 commuting to offices and schools which creates
a
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havoc in morning and evening hours,
this
 can be resolved by sharing the vehicle which travels on
thesame
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the same
 route.
Moreover
, the companies and schools should offer their
transport
 at cheaper cost so everyone will choose the common
transport
, resulting in less number of
vehicles
 on road.
Furthermore
, the government should impose the alternate usage of
vehicles
 as already implied by country like China which caused
the
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 tremendous decline in
traffic
. To recapitulate,
traffic
 congestion is a mind-blogging issue which needs to tackled as early as possible as not only it causes a delay in travel purpose but
also
 an amount of
traffic
 leads to the great amount of noise pollution and air pollution which can lead to detrimental health issues.
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