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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
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 globe, technology has no more necessary for writing letters . in
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 world, we can grid communicate with others through telepathy . today's era , reach massages like spread like wildfire so in the fasten decade no longer necessary to write a letter. In the following paragraph, I shall
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put forth my arguments to support my views. the
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 and for more merits are that smartphones quickly spread news and massages .
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 in the country , any region suffers some troubles for any reason those new emerged like fire.
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 nowadays invited new
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 like WhatsApp and Instagram . people can generally utilise these applications to connecting with friends and relatives
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 telepathy, we can use live video
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for any purpose
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 as talk, face-to-face interviews or we can see live activities. on the other
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 some demerits of modern communications some people spread fack information and use for the crime . today's new generation has no idea what is letters they would not get more information about the letters without any watch . To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that innovation is the greated sources for collecting huge things but some governments should put limited option to use it.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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