Describe the restaurant. What meal did you have there? Why do you think this restaurant is worth visiting?

Dear Sir I am writing

this

letter to share the experience of my visit to the Fine Dine

restaurant

This

restaurant

is situated in the centre of New York, near the City shopping complex. It provides a whole gamut of traditional foods to foreign ones under a single roof, which has a very comfortable sitting facility with a great ambience for dining at any time. Talking about the meals, I started with the appetizer that included veg soup with crumbed bread and it was mouthwatering and worth a try.

Then

, in the main course, I opted for lemon chicken and vegetable stew which were even more delicious. In the end, in deserts, I tasted choco lava which was quite different from all other restaurants and was very appealing. I recommend

this

restaurant

to all the readers because

this

restaurant

not only provides a great quality of food

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but

also

it is affordable for everyone. Apart from

this

, the hospitality of their staff is very friendly. Yours sincerely Alex Mathew

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

169 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Fully explain your ideas

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