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Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

#doctors #people #exercise
medical practitioners advice senior citizens to do
exercise
 daily, but grey
people
 are restricted
themselves
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to follow
this
 trend.
This
 essay sheds light on the possible reasons behind
this
 negative development, like, loss of motivation and fear of injury in older
age
.
On the other hand
, there are many possible measures which should be taken to develop
interest
 among elders to follow
healthy
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 life.
To begin
 with, one of the chief reasons why
people
 do not follow daily physical
exercise
 routine is
sink
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 of
interest
. Because, in older
age
, most of the individuals feel discouraged by their families and feel lonely and lose their
interest
 to do physical activities.
Moreover
, fear of getting body aches is
an
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another cause among
masses
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. They feel, if they get stuck to
exercise
 daily, they will get
sprain
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 or another major injury because in older ages body is not in full strength and more prone to
develope
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develop
sprain
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.
On the other hand
, by following health habits, one can easily develop
the
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interest
of
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 exercising regularly. Grey
people
 should start from walking routine to outside the home
,
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 so that they could meet with peer groups and share emotions with one another in order to get rid
from
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 boredom which
develop
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interest
 from
inner
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 side. Moving
further
, senior citizens should seek physicians help to get an idea about the exercises according to
age
 groups. So that they will start from
beginning
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 according to their ability and overcome
from
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the phobia of getting hurt. In conclusion,
although
 many doctors suggest
exercise
 should be an indispensable part
in
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 older
age
 but most of the folks do not want to see
this
 sunny side because of vivid reasons.oppositely,
people
 feel young by heart and adopt some suitable physical posters ,
then
 they would encourage themselves to keep their body fit.
Submitted by rajeev kumar on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivation
  • physical limitations
  • lack of time
  • fear of injury
  • exercise facilities
  • misunderstanding
  • benefits of exercise
  • social support
  • poor health conditions
  • awareness
  • appropriate exercises
  • guidance
  • financial constraints
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