Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

medical practitioners advice senior citizens to do
exercise
daily, but grey
people
are restricted
themselves
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to follow
this
trend.
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essay sheds light on the possible reasons behind
this
negative development, like, loss of motivation and fear of injury in older
age
.
On the other hand
, there are many possible measures which should be taken to develop
interest
among elders to follow
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life.
To begin
with, one of the chief reasons why
people
do not follow daily physical
exercise
routine is
sink
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of
interest
. Because, in older
age
, most of the individuals feel discouraged by their families and feel lonely and lose their
interest
to do physical activities.
Moreover
, fear of getting body aches is
an
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another cause among
masses
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. They feel, if they get stuck to
exercise
daily, they will get
sprain
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or another major injury because in older ages body is not in full strength and more prone to
develope
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develop
sprain
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.
On the other hand
, by following health habits, one can easily develop
the
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interest
of
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exercising regularly. Grey
people
should start from walking routine to outside the home
,
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so that they could meet with peer groups and share emotions with one another in order to get rid
from
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boredom which
develop
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interest
from
inner
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side. Moving
further
, senior citizens should seek physicians help to get an idea about the exercises according to
age
groups. So that they will start from
beginning
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according to their ability and overcome
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the phobia of getting hurt. In conclusion,
although
many doctors suggest
exercise
should be an indispensable part
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older
age
but most of the folks do not want to see
this
sunny side because of vivid reasons.oppositely,
people
feel young by heart and adopt some suitable physical posters ,
then
they would encourage themselves to keep their body fit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivation
  • physical limitations
  • lack of time
  • fear of injury
  • exercise facilities
  • misunderstanding
  • benefits of exercise
  • social support
  • poor health conditions
  • awareness
  • appropriate exercises
  • guidance
  • financial constraints
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