Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Wich other types of job should be highly paid?

In
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world, celebrities are the highest paid individuals across various categories but there are many other
people
who deserve more than they get now.
Thus
, I completely agree with the above statement and my essay below will elaborate on the same.
Firstly
, One of the main reason that superstars from entertainment
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earn more is because of the reach they have developed across the digital media in
this
modern world and
moreover
are able to influence
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people
around the globe.
People
who religiously follow their idols, like to know what they are wearing, eating and using to reach where they stand now and
hence
brands are investing huge sum of money in
such
personalities where returns are in form of publicity and
also
which increases their sale of products.
For example
, star footballer Christiano Ronaldo charges millions of euros to promote the product on various platforms where he interacts with
people
.
On the Contrary
, professions
such
as Cleaners, Construction workers and Military personnel yield very low income that sometimes it becomes very difficult to run their home. These are pupils who build homes so that you can have
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lifestyle, clean your sewages and drains so one can deserve
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and clean environment, and guard citizens
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any external threat that can come from war type situation. Since
this
folk are always from the public eye
people
forget to invest in them and are compensated very little for the work they carry out.
For example
, Policemen are always subjected to taking a bribe but situations like
such
have forced them to take
such
action to meet their lively hoods. To conclude, It seems public figures are overpaid just for the fact that they carry star power with them and not any important responsibility.
Hence
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completely agree with the above statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Market-driven economy
  • Societal value
  • Revenue generation
  • Public welfare
  • Compensation disparity
  • Essential services
  • Consumer culture
  • Media influence
  • Undervalued professions
  • Societal imbalance
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