Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that young age is the most wonderful

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others would say that

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will be more enjoyable.

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, I believe that

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. On the one hand,

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more enjoyable in several ways.

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their free time

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in sports as they like.

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, the mistakes made by them are forgiven easily as they

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without second thought, as a

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will be easy to join with them.

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childhood time most cheerful.

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can use the money earned in their profession to buy things which enable them to lead

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quality

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enough to understand what really makes them cheerful on a sustained basis with minimal effort,

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gift for his mother with his earnings will feel

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satisfaction.

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how adults feel more

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the feeling of self-achievement. In conclusion,I opine that

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adulthood

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is more enjoyable compared to

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teenagers

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as they can experience diverse things which make

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fulfilling despite the responsibilities, whilst teenagers can enjoy only a limited and specific set of things.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

253 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Formative years
Autonomy
Fulfillment
Wisdom
Significant choices
Exploration
Financial responsibilities
Deeper relationships
Personal growth
Accomplishments
Character development
Life milestones
Adulthood
Adolescence
Carefree nature
Achievements
Life satisfaction
Stress-free
Independence
Responsibilities

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