Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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It is important to consider the type of home when searching for a place to stay.
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some people want to stay in a
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, others feel that doing in
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the apartment
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has more benefits. In my essay, I will discuss
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the pros
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and cons of living in a
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.add personal opinion Considering
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negatives of
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, the most prominent one is that they usually are more dangerous.
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, most of the
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are protected only by locks, which can be easily broken down.
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, there are only one or two floors, so there are not any neighbours, who could hear your screams for help.
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,
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the apartments
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are more dependable. Apartments are guarded by cameras in lobbies and security guards.
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, there are more storeys, which reduces the risk of being robbed.
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, there is
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plenty of benefits of living in a
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. The most important argument is that
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they are spacious and private. Concerning the former,
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houses
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have more rooms
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so that every family member could have his own room. Concerning the latter,
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are located remotely and people are isolated. -
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, people who have children will have a chance to make a noise. without disturbing others.
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, you do not have
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opportunity in apartments as there are not much space and rooms as
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possess. In conclusion, due to some problems of living in an apartment
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as being too compact and closer proximity, I believe that the benefits of staying in a
house
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such
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as more freedom and more area outweigh the drawbacks.
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