Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Exploring
space
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, according to some
people
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, involves national
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rather than international effort. I totally agree with
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suggestion.
People
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develop
space
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exploration
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to be a power;
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, in the
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there may be a change with
space
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exploration
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. In the 21st
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the problem of astrology is very relevant, the "great powers" are competing with each other in its
exploration
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.
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, Russia and the United States are trying to be
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in everything and the study of
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as well. They do
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to ensure that other countries recognized their greatness and power.
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, more government is interested in exploring
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on its own, without the help of other countries.
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proves that
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are interested in national pride. It is no secret that many
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are concerned about outer
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research. Every year, wealthy businessmen invest their money in
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area, and the system of
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exploration
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is changing.
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, in 2021 the
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test landing on Mars for NASA, which is a huge breakthrough compared with the past years. Previously,
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were interested in exploring the moon. In conclusion, I can say that
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are more interested in national pride than international
exploration
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. Perhaps in the
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this
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state of affairs will change.
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