men and women employed in full time jobs should share the responsibility of households chore .do you agree or disagree ? share relevant personal experiences.

it is irrefutable that, the number of households where partners work is steadily on the rise and

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hardly surprising. certain segments of society believe that it is no wonder that more men are taking on the responsibility of domestic life. while

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and relationships quality the married couple experience .I would like to delve into both opinions before forming an opinion. to being with, employers have a stable career with one employer .they have a good persona and health insurance.there are many lots of benefits like a,their salaries gradually increase.they may be promoted with the organization ,

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,they demonstrated loyalty.wen and women employers in full-time work and experienced staff can be trusted with more responsibility .due to, they become part of a teamwork .mail and female are both responsible

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, working in Dubai I taught English to

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of several dubi income families most higher .

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show ,parents who equally shoulder the burden of household duties pass on worthy character traits to these

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experience can benefit from their sharing in the changes of the day by day life

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she was always very gracious of my father when he would take the time to help with her duties around the house.

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sharing in hardships helped to strengthen my parent's union and acts as author benefits to the equal divvying of ordinary duties between married

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the reason ,our parents or

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should responsible for life . to conclude, after looking at how equal burden can benefit a married couple's

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and relationships ,it is clear that

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an opinion that should be supported.