Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.

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of choices to live as a student, you can live in

university

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dormitories or you can live in the apartments in the community. Both have

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own advantages. In my view, I would like to live in

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university

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a university

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dormitory as it is cheap and all the activities will be

in

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on

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the

university

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campus like gym, sport, etc

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lot

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of students are going out from there home country for there higher education in the

university

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. Which is very exciting for anyone, as for me when

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went out for my higher education (MBBS) to Ukraine, I was very excited and

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bit

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, as it was a totally new place for and totally new language so it was a bit scary ,like how

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am going to adjust there, but

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was excited

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because now

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i

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am starting my

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. When

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reached there the one thing which came

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my mind was where

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am going to live should

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live in

dormitory

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a dormitory

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or live in

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apartment

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an apartment

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. I chose to live in

dormitory

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the dormitory

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as it is more cheap and convenient

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me everything which

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needed was there

in

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the

university

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campus only like

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if

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have to go gym

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can do it

in

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the

university

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campus only and

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can find people from my country and can get socialize with them so will not feel homesick. How living in the

apartment

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is costly and

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will have to search for the

apartment

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which will cost me a time and money both, but living in the

apartment

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have

it

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own benefits like: you can get your own space,can do whatever you want, can throw your

cloths

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clothes

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anywhere no one is there to scold you and if you

are have

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a girlfriend

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you can get you personal space or you can stay together

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, you can cook whatever you want, etc. Overall

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will

perfer

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prefer

to live in the

university

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dormitories as it is more

situable

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suitable

for me. In

conclusion

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both

university

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dormitories and apartments have

there

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their

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own advantages.