Some people believe academic success depends mostly on having a good teacher. Others argue that it is the attitude of the student that matters most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is commonly suggested that having

a qualified

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a qualified teacher

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teachers

would significantly contribute to academic

success

while others believe that

this

success

relies mostly on the student's attitude. In my opinion, I would agree with the former statement because

teachers

play a pivotal role in improving the

education

system. Advocates of considering learners attitudes as an important part of academic

success

claim that their performance can help to evaluate the effectiveness of

learning

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process.

This

is because if

students

failed in exams or obtained lower grades,

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it would easily indicate whether the

education

system achieved or fall behind its academic goals. The school's

principle

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principal

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,

for example

, can determine the

success

rate of

students

based on the results of their final exams and projects, and

therefore

this

helps the school to evaluate if its practice could enhance the academic performance of

students

.

Hence

, pupils reaction to the

education

process

are

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considered a critical factor in determining the level of academic performance.

However

, I disagree with

this

perspective because

students

attitude is not an accurate standard for assessing the quality of

education

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system.Outstanding and

talanted

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talented

teachers

has

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an enormous impact on pupils progress because they know the weakness and

strenght

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strength

of each student, and

consequently

design an academic program in proportion to all the

students

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student's

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capabilities per class.

For instance

, A good math teacher would use examples from children environment to simplify difficult concepts,

such

as equations and measurement. To sum up, it might seem sensible to depend on the attitude of

students

to achieve higher levels of academic

success

, but I would

definitly

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definitely

go against

this

view because it is

clearly

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that having

brillient

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brilliant

teachers

could significantly develop the learning process.