Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some ideas exist that youngsters could contribute their spare time to work volunteering for society. I totally agree with that opinion as there

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a lot of young

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their time

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unhealthy activities.

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essay will discuss why teenagers must join with community tasks.

To begin

with, teenagers have good health and sharp minds to help their communities. To make it clear,

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means the age of 15 to 22 years old is regarded as puberty with well-being and creativity. They can learn fast and use their power to assist others.

For example

, a young teen might spend their hours after school to go to a nursing home or hospital and support the staff to run errands. Clearly, the youngster is stronger and smarter than other ages,

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they should give a hand to teen who are living around them.

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, these growing teen are developing their life skills,

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, it is crucial to volunteer and correct their demerits. Nowadays, there are a bunch of teenagers who prefer spending their leisure time on computer and smartphone without interacting with

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.

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shapes their personalities and cognition to be slow and dependable.

However

, if they go outside and collaborate with others, they definitely pick up on a variety of useful lessons.

For instance

, a youngster who would like to volunteer for daycare,

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probably can gain some skills of taking care of kids and others.

Thus

, volunteering benefits each individual if they aspire to perfect their moralities. In conclusion, contributing effort

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the community brings many advantages for

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teen, and helps them to establish their goals in the future.