Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#topic #rubbish #governments #amount

It is true that nowadays we produce more

garbage

. People waste a lot of

food

which is producing

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garbage

. In

this

task

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talk

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, I explain

about

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that rubbish with instances and

also

talk about some of the steps that the

govenment

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government

need to take about that problem .

This

problem needs to be avoided to make our environment neat and clean. The

first

and foremost reason for that issue is the wasting of

food

. Nowadays people buy

things

extra and when

the

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things

got expired they discard the

things

which makes a pile of extra rubbish .

For instance

, some families are nuclear these days but they buy

things

like they buy 3 bags of bread and the number of members is less in the family . They don'

use all the bread and they discard and some of the members in the family order

food

from outside and they don'

want to share with everyone and he or she eat that amount of

food

which he wants . And

rest

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the rest

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of the

food

is wasted. So for

this

families need to buy

things

according to there family members and

also

need to be

care

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about the likes and dislikes the

food

Furthermore

,v the

govenment

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government

needs to make some laws for proper

garbage

For example

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Some amount

need

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to be fixed for a house like 2 bags for a

one- house

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by which they don'

make extra

garbage

. And only one day in a week for the

garbage

that been picked by

garbage

trucks. At

last

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would like to say that if we make less

garbage

it males our environment net and clean . All the people get

proper

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the proper

a proper

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amount of

food

from the stores . They don'

need to go back again for the same

food

. It's in our hand how we clean our atmosphere.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

315 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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consumerism
sustainability
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waste management
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environmental impact
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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Include an introduction and conclusion

In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people arque that it is more Important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life, Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or anegative trend?

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do yo agree with this statement ?

Science tells us that some activities are good for our health, while some others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change this?