Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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education
boys
and
girls
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. There is in
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the opinion
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that gender
education
has many positive effects on
life
children
.
However
, some people believe that co-
education
of
boys
and
girls
are more necessary for their
life
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I will try to provide some arguments about it and refer to my opinion about it. On the one hand,
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gender
education
increases
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of knowledge, because
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different
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programs for study.
Boys
and
girls
have different understand information and
then
everyone
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special
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a special
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approach.
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,
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boys
do logical issues better than
girls
.
In addition
, in
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high
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teenagers pay attention to their appearance more time and negative reactions of the opposite sex can cat them from
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the study
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.
This
is not the case in separate classes.
On the other hand
, joint
education
boys
and
girls
impact
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their communication and
then
successful socialization in the future.
Children
in these classes learn to communicate
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other and get their experience.
For instance
, when
children
resolve problems together they will learn to communicate with different people in their future job.
Moreover
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children
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them to enter to any University how
boys
, so
girls
. I think, if
children
to educate together in schools, they will become more communicative and more successful. It is very valuable for
life
. By the way of conclusion, a separate
education
has as negative effects, as
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a positive
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impact for
life
children
, but I feel, that the joint
education
boys
and
girls
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more advantage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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