A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

A lot of places in the world rely on

tourism

as a main source of

income

. Unfortunately,

tourism

can

also

be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of

tourism

in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of

tourism

outweigh its drawbacks? Today the vast majority of popular touristic places are closed due to pandemic situation. And if they were not ready for disasters like

this

, they would suffer from

lack

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of

income

in their budget. So, generally speaking, the question of proper management in areas like

this

, is crucial. On the one hand, profit earned by local restaurants, bars, hotels and SPA

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, in the period of abundance could make citizens of

this

area happier.

Furthermore

, services for travellers usually need many workers and have

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high profit

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margin.

For instance

, if people regularly pay enough taxes,

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could turn them into various modern facilities like hospitals, schools, and kindergartens. So,

income

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tourism

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could lead to the development of the country.

On the other hand

, we couldn’t prevent natural disasters and epidemics from happening, so sometimes if your region relies on

tourism

too much you might be in trouble.

Moreover

, just lack of sunlight or nor warm enough water in the ocean

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may lead to harmful consequences for the economy.

For example

,

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year Italian and Spanish society

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been struggling from

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a shortage

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of money, because they gained the most of their

income

from travellers.

Therefore

, governments of countries like

this

must have a foundation for stabilizing social conditions in

this

case. Generally speaking, depending on visitors from other countries brings not only a positive impact

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but

also

can damage the local economy. From my point of view, the benefits of

tourism

outweigh the drawbacks and with certain

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this

sector could improve the economical situation of any country.