water scarcity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government?

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is life but
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water
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shortage problem is increasingly raising day by day. Nowadays numerous country
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faced
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scarcity issue.
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issue. It is undoubtedly true that we are responsible for
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scarcity because of
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and take of awareness about recycling
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most of the
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countries are suffered
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of
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developed countries are not concern about it.
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not full of dishes and cloth. And
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government
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do not care about
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process so that he
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not invest in any program and project
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it. We can get knowledge from
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that people complain to
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to provide clean
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by recycling. In the recent
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the problem is not much difficult to solve so we can do together by using
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effectively and
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government
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should look to the technology for recycling,
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scarcity may control by drip irrigation whereas we have
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great technology, On top of that individually we can contribute through turn off
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water
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when we do not need it. In my home what I do, when I brush my teeth I always off the faucet.
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we can do desalination which is the process of removing salt from seawater
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can use for drinking
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. For that
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should invest money in the industry. We can see we have
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of technology even if we do not imply it. But we can do for
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. In conclusion, the world’s one of the portion of people are faced
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the problem. So we should aware
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using
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and try to recycle it. If we do not control, it will
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the whole global constantly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water scarcity
  • overconsumption
  • depletion
  • inefficient
  • outdated irrigation
  • climate change
  • potable water
  • water-efficient appliances
  • rainwater harvesting
  • conservation
  • modernizing infrastructure
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable water management
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