Some believe that is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Other says if is the government that should take care of the environment. Discussing both the view and give your opinion.

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climate change is affecting for the worse, it has become essential for everyone to contribute in
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possible they can to stop
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hazardous act from happening time and again.
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is it necessary for individuals to take up responsibility? and
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, how authorities can implement numerous rules which one should follow.
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with, people need to take care of their surroundings in order to lead a healthy life and
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, it has become
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time. In recent times, there is a massive increase seen in heart and lung due increase seen in Air pollution which has impacted the mortality rate. Due to
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in water
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there is a spike seen in cases of Cholera, Malaria and Jaundice. Keeping territory clean not only affects your health in
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keeps you fresh mentally.
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states
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of America and India both saw
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in deaths of
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citizens due to Heart Attach and Malaria in
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2019.
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needs to introduce various norms and
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regulations
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which needs to be followed or citizens need to compensate with
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fine. They need to regulate sectors like Heavy industries and Auto manufactures of their product which releases the
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poisonous
gases which
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the environment and human health. Administrations can introduce various schemes and awards for the person or the bodies who participate in improving environmental conditions.
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, Mithbai college in Bombay was awarded for the Tree Plantation
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initiatives
and students who took part
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the same were granted scholarships for their
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studies. To conclude, In my honest opinion whatever mankind wants has to start at home
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, officials can lay down the rules and norms but it is humankind who need to follow them.
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