Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of human. Other people think it is wrong to exploit anima for human purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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increasing numbers of people are concerned about animal right. Whether we should sacrifice animal right or band animal experiments is a controversial issue. I stand for the point of view that we should take care of human`s needs

first

.

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, it is obvious that animal trial

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“the

last

frontiers “before any treatment preformed

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human

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body.

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now going through a critical process of vaccination due to Covid 19 pandemic. There are usually four stages of clinical intervention phrases when it comes to pharmaceutical creation procedure. How can the test vaccines go straight on

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before we rule out mostly all major possible side effects? So in

this

situation, animal pre-tests are necessary that it will protect us from any unexpected scenarios after we already lost so many.

Moreover

, if human beings do not use every power we have to survive, how can we even talk about protecting other species?

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means that tests,

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experiments

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been operated on animals are not only helped to achieve human goals but

also

help us to better understand others as well. ”Exploitation ”

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needed when it

come

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for

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greater

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good

this

is

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universal rule which applied

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both

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and human world.

However

,

that is

not to say human rights are superior

than

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animal right. Scientists are searching for

alternative

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method to prevent

this

happened. But

unfortunately

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we did not find out a replacement yet. It is

also

extremely expensive. We should

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public

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that animal benefits are

significant

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that we should only conduct the experiment

under

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an ethical and lawful environment. In sum, it is acceptable to use

animal

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benefit for human purpose.

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we should not ignore our duty to protect them. By doing so we can make sure that

this

planet stays balance and health.