Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that criminal activities
has
geared exceedingly globally. Change the verb form
have
However
, while some believe that these offenses
are handled productively than before, I would agree with those who argue that strict actions are still required to control Change the spelling
offences
crime
.
To commence with its
is important to consider the Change the pronoun
it
invovlement
of numerous technological advances in curtailing Correct your spelling
involvement
crime
rate.Correct article usage
the crime
This
is becuase
,the observation and detection of a Correct your spelling
because
crime
under CCTV surveillance has
actively enhanced the power of police to catch the criminal. To cite an example, if a Change the verb form
have
theif
, who enters Correct your spelling
thief
in
a money bank with an intention of conducting a robbery might get caught leading him directly towards imprisonment due to the presence of Change preposition
apply
camera
in that Add an article
the camera
a camera
pemises
. Correct your spelling
premises
Also
, in many facilities nowadays, there are siren and burgler
alarm systems installed to prevent the Correct your spelling
burglar
occurance
of Correct your spelling
occurrence
crime
and for safety reasons.Thus
, now illegal acts are tackled in a more effective manner which was not the case earlier.
However
, I beleive
that the enforcement of Correct your spelling
believe
a
strict punishment is the only way to minimise Correct article usage
apply
the
major crimes Correct article usage
apply
such
as murder or acid attacks. The reason for this
is that unwitnessed or crime
are considered as bailable
offence which strengthens the criminal's will to repeat the action Add an article
a bailable
agian
.Correct your spelling
again
Submitted by jhalakbakshi1992 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite