Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online?
Internet
makes Add an article
The Internet
whole
world into Change the article
the whole
tiny
village and Add an article
the tiny
purchacing
things Correct your spelling
purchasing
is
become very easy and Change the verb form
are
conveinent
due to online shopping .But it has its own pros and cons ,Correct your spelling
convenient
will
discuss in Correct pronoun usage
which will
this
essay.
There are immense Linking Words
benifits
of digital purchasing like it saves money along with time. Correct your spelling
benefits
For instance
, if you want to buy shoes Linking Words
by
just one click it goes to your cart and delivered to your home .Change preposition
with
Moreover
, purchasing online gives ample Linking Words
of
choices for the same Change preposition
apply
product
.As per Use synonyms
latest
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the latest
article
65 % worlds population like to do online shopping reason behind Add a comma
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this
is people are getting variety in Linking Words
Use synonyms
product
without going anywhere.
On Add an article
the product
a product
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the other
other
side , There are chances of fraud Change the wording
another
occures
in digital shopping because when it comes to Correct your spelling
occurs
pay
.Hackers try to fool customer and money fraud could happen.Change the verb form
paying
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Product
which looks attractive but at the time of receiving Use synonyms
product
may be totally different .Use synonyms
For example
, when you buy Linking Words
t-shirt
online quality looks far better Correct article usage
a t-shirt
then
you receive .but in reality it can be worst.Most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
people
avoid Add an article
the people
buy
expensive items from websites like laptop , cellphones and tablet because of while delivering there are chances to break the glass . No one Change the verb form
buying
take
Change the verb form
takes
responsiblitis
for your item.
To sum up , online shopping save time and money but there is always Correct your spelling
responsibility
risk
of fraud and sometimes you have to compromise with Add an article
the risk
a risk
quality
of Add an article
the quality
Use synonyms
product
.Add an article
the product
a product
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...