You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Everyone knows that our earth is moving towards
the
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Global warming, but why is that? nobody is serious about it. Yes, we are thinking and just thinking. Busy in our regular schedule but what are we contributing to ? No answer for
this
. When I sit back on my chair and think about why
,
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the very
first
thing
comes
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that comes
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to my mind is we are producing more and more rubbish. I mean,
plastic
. Yes
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Plastic
. If we see everywhere
people
are using more and more
plastic
by way of grocery shopping
bags
,
plastic
pet bottles,
plastic
utensils,
use
and throw
plastic
dishes & cups etc.
,
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While using them we
dont
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don't
think that these are unnecessary items though we
use
them for our enjoyment or
may be
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maybe
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we are in hurry.
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The use
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of
plastic
is banned in some cities,
country's
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but still
people
are using them.
for example
.
People
intend to
use
the
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plastic
bags
when they but the
grocey
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grocery
because
its
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free. Some of the grocery stores
dont
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don't
charge for the shopping
bags
and
people
take advantage of it.
Also
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we can see the
second
example like whenever we celebrate any Birthdays or any
occassion
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occasion
, we normally buy the
plastic
use
and throw plates and cups because they are cheap and sturdy as well as they
comes
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in different
colors
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. A simple and known example is we
use
plastic
garbage
bags
in our daily life to throw our daily garbage. Somewhere it should stop and we should have
find
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the
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ways to come out
from
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this
situation. As we are a society, we should help our
Government
to reduce the
use
of
plastic
also
we can do
this
individually by accepting some natural ways to overcome it. Now
a
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days
Government
is taking
a
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strict action against the grocery stores or departmental stores for handing out
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plastic
bags
, we should support
this
act by refusing the
plastic
bag at the cash counter and better to carry our cloth
bags
while we go
for
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shopping. The
Government
should strictly
banned
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the
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plastic
companiesif
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companies if
companies
they
dont
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don't
follow the
Government
guidlines
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guidelines
. The
Government
can put up TV advertisements for not using
such
rubbish, they should promote the products which are nature safe. They should conduct small meetings through the local party leader spreading the awareness about
this
among all, in villages, in towns and in cities too. By doing
this
, the coming generation will
deficately
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definitely
understand what is
benefictial
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beneficial
to them.
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