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Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

#people #jobs #work #months #year #rest #time
Doing temporary work is usually regarded as a significantly negative impact on
people
’s careers in
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modern societies, and I think many
people
 are unwilling to give up making money to spend a long
time
on
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doing something
what
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 they like.
This
 essay will analyse
this
 phenomenon and illustrate my opinion. From
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 historic perspective, ancient
people
 normally live with the seasons. In fact, our ancestors did not hustle and bustle in their lives, and they have more free
time
 than today’s
people
 do some interesting things.
For example
, farmers were busy to plant seeds in the spring, and harvested crop in the autumn. Herdsmen pasture their cattle on the extensive grassland.
In
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 the rest of the
time
, they did what the like, including creating new tools for production, writing brilliant poems for beloved
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, drawing pictures follow one’s feeling.
As a result
, those things created gradually became a piece of
civilization
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 of human. Coming back
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 present, in
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modern society, everyone becomes a part of the machinery.
People
 under
the
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heavy pressure have to follow the fast-paced society, someone won and someone lost.
This
 arouses some
people
 making the decision to change their lifestyle, following their feeling to enjoy short
time
 life, innovate new things according to their passion and enthusiasm. In conclusion, I deeply understand that
this
 phenomenon
in
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today will become normal in the future. Everyone should change thinking pattern to ask societies give them more liberal
time
 to achieve one’s potential and release one’s giftedness ,
instead
 of working like robots, living like slaves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • pursue
  • self-development
  • life satisfaction
  • balance
  • job security
  • financial instability
  • stress and anxiety
  • unemployment
  • long-term financial commitments
  • diverse experiences
  • employability
  • broader perspective
  • adaptable
  • innovative
  • career progression
  • benefits
  • personal growth
  • financial security
  • invest
  • career milestones
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