Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advent of the industrial revolution and marvels of technology has entirely modified our ways of living in terms of communication, education, transport, warfare and agriculture. Thousands of manufacturing industries have made
prodigious
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amount of
products
available to a large population. These
products
are
avaiable
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available
in
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different prices , varieties and qualities. Some people opine that
products
should be made to
last
longer. Whereas others object that
products
should be cheap so everyone especially with meagre income can benefit from it. In my opinion,
economical
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and safe
product
that lasts a considerable amount of time deemed a
quality
product
that is
both people and
environmental
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environmentally
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friendly.
To begin
with, though the
products
that are made up of
low
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low-quality
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quality
materials are cheap
but
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they may break within
few
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a few
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days and ends in bins. These cheap single
uses
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throw-away materials are hard to decompose and pollutes the water sources which endangers species and human survival on the planet.
Moreover
, economical
products
are not valued and used properly, eventually end in waste and replaced by another cheap
product
.
This
vicious cycle continues which does not save money rather its a financial and environmental burden.
Hence
,
i
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suggest that
focus
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the focus
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of manufacturing should be on sustainability and overall safety. When the demand goes up and sales are in large volumes, prices come down ,
therefore
quality
is more substantial.
On the contrary
, some people contend that the
product
's price should be economical so that a wide community can improve their lifestyle through the utilization of
products
like everyday kitchen utensils including blender and dishwasher. These appliances are essential to making
housechores
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house chores
easy and
saves
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a lot of time. The technology is expensive when its new in the market and is not accessible to everyone. In
this
case, research
in to
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innovative procedures is required to make the
product
cheaper for customers with considerable
quality
.
For instance
, solar energy derived electricity is made cheaper and
therefore
affordable for everyone. To conclude, business, investors and research institutes should aim to develop
products
that are planet friendly, sustainable and affordable for
eveyone
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everyone
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • disposable goods
  • economic benefits
  • frequent replacements
  • technological adaptation
  • manufacturing affordability
  • environmental responsibility
  • longevity
  • minimize costs
  • wider society
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