Increasing the price of patrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective.

Nowadays ,increasing pollution is a major concern and some individuals suggest that for resolving the issues of traffic and pollution, rising
in
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the fuel
price
will prove beneficial.
However
, I completely disaccord with the solution as there are many other ways to control environmental pollution and traffic congestion. Let's discuss with
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examples to show up my point of view.
Firstly
,
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in the
patrol
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petrol
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price
will lead to
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economic recession in the country.
In other words
,
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economy will suffer from
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of flow of money in the market
as a result
from
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the
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less spending by citizens because of inflation.
Moreover
, it will badly
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the nation's image in the international community.
For instance
,
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the global
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organisation will put pressure on the government to take necessary measures in order to tackle the problem of
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in
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petrol
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price
.
Secondly
,
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a rise
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in fuel
price
will have
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effect on the
middle class
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people as
this
will put more pressure on their pocket.
Further
, they are not able to commute daily for work and studies purposes. To cite an example,
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a hike
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in fuel
price
will
also
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to
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a rise
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rise
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in
ticket
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price
of public transport. Overall, citizens are the
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who
suffer
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more from the burden of
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an increase
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in
price
.
Consequently
,
this
will broaden the gap between the rich and the poor. To conclude,
although
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a hike
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in
patrol
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petrol
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prices is a constructive idea ,
however
other measures
such
as
introduction
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the introduction
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of electronic vehicles and promotion of public transport may bring a change.
In addition
, awareness programs should be encouraged
among
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citizens.
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