Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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the buying and drinking habits that people have while consuming

coffee

and tea and

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survey is done in five Australian cities. Overall , most of the public went to a café for

coffee

or tea in cities

such

as Melbourne and Hobart in

last

4 weeks, meanwhile,

almost

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equal

amount

of people bought fresh

coffee

from Brisbane and Adelaide in

last

4 weeks but

this

is the least

amount

.

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, there is a minimum difference between

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of the population in Adelaide who bought instant

coffee

and went to a restaurant in

last

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4 weeks. The highest

amount

of the public went to a restaurant

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offered

coffee

or tea in Melbourne and Hobart which is approximately 64

percent

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and the

amount

was equal for both the cities.

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,

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but almost equal

amount

of people purchased fresh

coffee

in Brisbane and Adelaide and

this

was around 34

percent

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.

In addition

to that, there is

a

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least difference between the public who went to a café and those who purchased instant

coffee

and that was about 1

percent

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.