Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Tourism plays a vital role in enhancing our
knowlegde
about the world. Correct your spelling
knowledge
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However
some individuals uphold the view that with Add a comma
,However
advancement
in technology, now Add an article
the advancement
everthing
is available on television shows and online programs. Correct your spelling
everything
This
essay will analyse both views and I firmly of the view that visiting a place physically adds to our experience.
To commence with, travelling to a foreign Linking Words
country
teach us new life lessons. To put it differently, going on a vacation to an alien land opens door to a new culture and Use synonyms
the
traditions ,plus getting a Correct article usage
apply
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first hand
experience of the people. Add a hyphen
first-hand
Thus
it Linking Words
give
us more opportunity to learn more about other nations. Change the verb form
gives
Secondly
, if Linking Words
any
individual wants to master a foreign language than travelling to a Correct your spelling
an
country
where Use synonyms
this
is a native language helps them to learn more effectively and in the local accent. Linking Words
For instance
, moving to Linking Words
a
Change the article
an
english
speaking Change the capitalization
English
country
in order to speak Use synonyms
english
fluently. Change the capitalization
English
Lastly
, one can gain more understanding of Linking Words
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country's
past by visiting Add an article
the country's
a country's
to
its historical and ancient places in comparison to reading it from online resources.
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apply
On the other hand
, today with the advent of Linking Words
internet
,everything is available online. Add an article
the internet
This
is very helpful for those who can not visit a Linking Words
country
because of financial reasons. Use synonyms
Moreover
, now television is an integral part of every householdLinking Words
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, as a result,
as a result
they can watch shows from different countries. Linking Words
This
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give
them exposure to the lives of people from various nations and they can follow the clothing trend of their Change the verb form
gives
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
country
. To Use synonyms
site
an example, Correct your spelling
cite
chef
can learn recipes of Italian Add an article
the chef
a chef
couisine
through Youtube videos. Correct your spelling
cuisine
In addition
, Linking Words
this
can lower the travel expenses as one can take Linking Words
an
advantage of the information provided online without visiting a place.
To conclude, Remove the article
apply
although
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with
the help of TV and internet videos ,people can be benefited with Add the comma(s)
,with
lot
of information about the Change the article
a lot
country
, Use synonyms
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however
I believe that getting the real experience is far more Add a comma
,however
relevent
and Correct your spelling
relevant
thus
, broaden our prospectives about the Linking Words
country
.Use synonyms
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