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People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

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Nowadays, individuals' intake of sugary
drinks
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 raised. Causing
alot
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a lot
lot
 of
health related
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 problems. Solutions must be found to lower these amounts. Devouring added sugar
drinks
 can lead to many health issues. It can increase sugar levels in the Nowadaysbody, and make people gain weight. As an example, recent studies have shown that
alot
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lot
 of teenagers started suffering from overweight and increased blood pressures,
as a result
 of their massive intakes of soft
drinks
 and manufactured added sugar juices.
This
 is because of their affordability and sweet taste. To solve
this
 problem the authorities must raise taxes for these products, and prevent offering them in primary and high schools to stop the youth from buying them.
Furthermore
, health facilities should provide awareness sessions and public services to enlarge individuals
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 about the risks they are facing. Another thing that can be done is to remove vend machines from public places
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 or replace these products with more
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 options. Marketing can be one of the main reasons for the huge ingest of sugary
drinks
.
This
 is an important part because watching bright advertisements
everyday
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 will make people craving for it.
For example
, using famous football players as a face for soft
drinks
 campaigns could lead
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a lot
 of his followers to copy his actions. To solve
this
 problem the authorities must put regulations and
messures
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measures
 for advertising . Its the government's responsibility to tackle these issues. And they can start by considering the solutions provided above.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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