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Some people believe school children should help to create rules their schools. Others say teacher alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #school #children #rules #schools #teacher
In
this
 modern era,
education
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the education
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 system has been enhanced significantly compared to
past
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the past
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 and
also
 the requirements of discipline and
rules
 should
be require
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 to mould the
student
 behaviour
accordingly
.
Although
 some say it is the responsibility of
teachers
 while others think pupils can help to develop these
rules
. In the upcoming essay, I will discuss both views and form my opinion. On the one hand, it is a prime onus
of
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 the teacher to make appropriate
rules
 for students to shape
school
 culture.
For instance
, how the
school
 atmosphere will look if all the students put on various kinds of clothes all
the
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days? Absolutely not good because how children will be identified? If it is persisted for
long
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 time, there will be no any respect
to
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teachers
 because gradually fear will diminish and no
any
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student
 will
listen
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teachers
 resultantly.
On the other hand
,
obviously
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,obviously
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student
 can help to make
rules
. If there is
partnership
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a partnership
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 of the
student
 to
crate
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create
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rules
, they may be obeying the
rules
 but
if
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it
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 must be
in
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within
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 limit.
Also
,
teachers
 have enough maturity by their experience for how to cope with
different
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a different
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 type of
student
 mentality and what
rules
 should
to
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require to instil good manners in each
student
.
For instance
, they can catch the
student
 easily where he spoke
lie
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a lie
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.
Finally
, to sum
up
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 to crate proper
school
rules
 is an accountability of the teacher to develop
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well-bred
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well bred
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well-bred
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 society by implanting good morals in each
student
. Younger
school
 children are never mature enough to create
rules
 in their
school
except
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 some exceptions.
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